Recommendation Letter to Bank for Improvement

Recommendation Letter to bank in what areas need improvement, or growth? Areas of improvement recommendation.

Recommendation Letter to a Bank for Security

Dear bank manager,

I am writing to you because I would like to make a few recommendations that you could do to improve the efficiency of your bank. I used to work for one of the most famous banks in the world the royal bank of Scotland, and they had the best security you could get.

I recommend that you get fingerprint scanners for your staff this will allow them to enter the building without having to wear ID cards. This will minimize the chance of someone steeling the cards, and being an impostor.  I would also recommend that you have some security person standing guard at the door of the building, and a metal detector just on the inside of the door so that no people will have to go past, and know that you are serious bank with real security.

When I came to your bank I was just there to check my account but I was shocked to see that there was literally no security whatsoever. I hope that you will listen, and take what I have said seriously because one day you will be robbed so by doing this you can help to prevent this. I look forward to seeing what action you have to take.

Yours sincerely,

Mr. Dracula Count

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